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Old 06-19-2009, 02:49 PM   #16
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. nice battle .
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Old 06-20-2009, 01:05 AM   #17
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good work by both writers.

locust i liked your rhymes, they flowed well. some witty punches.

daliff your rhymes were nice as well, killing the wordplay.

overall,
locust i thought ur first verse was straight, the gay jokes were funny but then soon after they just starting getting redundant. What's this "wack" and "i won" banter? (swaying to me it looks) Your second verse was better although i did catch acouple feeding lines, but there were no rules against it.

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Old 06-20-2009, 09:57 AM   #18
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aight cool 2-1 for daliff
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Old 06-20-2009, 11:36 PM   #19
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Old 06-22-2009, 01:06 AM   #20
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i gotta go with locust


nothing against the other dude, he was good and all
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Old 06-22-2009, 09:05 AM   #21
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its a close one! daliff ur a dope battler, i've never had such a close match 2-2
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Old 07-05-2009, 08:45 AM   #22
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daliff make dope shit! peace man.
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Old 07-23-2009, 01:55 AM   #23
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Old 07-23-2009, 07:45 PM   #24
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need some elaborated votes
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vote for daliff

both wrote smooth shit
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Old 07-24-2009, 07:22 PM   #26
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Old 08-04-2009, 09:46 PM   #27
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bump for TKO.....
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Old 08-04-2009, 11:58 PM   #28
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haha mine was finished way before yours =P
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Old 08-05-2009, 03:50 AM   #29
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Daliffs grammar game was on point and came better with the flow. i really dug how he switched up hir rhyme scheme in the second round but Locusts seemed more personal with the sig hits even and he came harder in the second round even tho the gay jokes got old.
the lines
"you spit like you're reverting thirteen...
half of you don't understand what half of the shit in my verse means..."
kinda overhyped the verse... it was like sayin something without saying something. locusts had more relative substance despite its simplicity so im rollin wit Locust.
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Old 08-06-2009, 02:42 AM   #30
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