Palehorse vs. DUSK

[iniquity]

. waiting for dusk to drop his second verse but if it's only a 1 rd battle dusk got this .

[DVSK]

holy shit, didnt realize this was 2 rounds...verse comin shortly.

[DVSK]

your facing greatness horse, so ur tastin humiliation
ima hang u upside down like a Mason initiation
so u wastin time tryin to chase behind dusk, youll find dust
tryin to rhyme with us, ill make ya motherfuckin hymen bust
shinin under pressure like a diamond does, rockin grills
like charcoal, my bars mold into plastic explosives
my acid's corrosive, so stand back and scan the lines
like bar codes, ya legs are shakin like its hammer time
cant define how i redefine the term massacre
my vernakular's redesigned, i could burn africa
with firm character i knock this bonehead off his high horse
apply force, leave him sWollen with an eye sore
from puerto rico to shangai: a lizard lecture
right now, Horse is suckin more Puerto Rican dick than HZA HECTOR

[Mumm Ra]

hahah dusk is nice, never really read your work before
i wouldn't wanna battle you tho

[Frailhorse]

i got one more round in me..................stay tuned

[DVSK]

thanks...btw...to clarify, that lizard line was refering to a story horse may or may not tell yall...eloels. the votes can start now i guess.

[DVSK]

wow,, ok 3 rounds...eloels.

[Frailhorse]

matter fact, go ahead and vote, i could go another but its not like i got alot of votes and need a tie breaker or something...well played dusk

[DVSK]

ite, not doubt kid....voatz.

[Frailhorse]

fuck it. fuck votes.i dont give a fuck if i win or lose.im having fun its about the art so check it

2009 let me rewind and pull it back
like im cocking this gat,
like dusk pullin on foreskin and nutsacks
with star trek type facts, ill travel back ,
and kill this cat again like i did my first track
duke u whack ha ha ha ha ha

ill build and destroy, real type mccoy
you trying to mcgeyver up a story
on how u taking on this horseman army
the clavary is what you should call me
i be in fatigues like the army, hiding in trees
with metal and magic youd think its alchemy
or wizardry, rob u, leave u in your fleece, then flee
all youll hear is a stampede
while you sound like a broken record player
u aint no lizard u a regular taxpayer
but it dont matter cuz u fucking with a dragon slayer

[BambinoTTT EgWest]

like dusk pullin my foreskin and nutsack?!?!?!?!?!? no homo? no? lol

no disrespect but Dusk ate you homie, but Dusk, you know I'm the best ever to do this!

[Poetic Wun]

Originally Posted by Dusk

cant define how i redefine the term massacre
my vernakular's redesigned, i could burn africa
with firm character i knock this bonehead off his high horse
apply force, leave him sWollen with an eye sore
from puerto rico to shangai: a lizard lecture
right now, Horse is suckin more Puerto Rican dick than HZA HECTOR

daaaaaaaaamn with some lol's thrown in.
even threw in a lil subliminal, ive never read much of ur shit but wowzers.

sometimes the wack dude makes the other cat look good but this is just nice.

@Pale
i like the improvement. ur catching on with the rhyming-within i see.
try some wordplay and using multi-syllable words that are really similar next to each other a lil too (i.e. Dusk= define, redefine, redesign)
unfortunately the charade needn't proceed any longer.
3verses v. Dusk's 2 still tops yours. your improvement came a lil too late my friend.
his worplay was stronger, even without that he was able to implement more hits altogether.

my vote 4 dusk

keep rhymin tho Pale, i wanna see the improvements.

[beautifulrock]

abstain

[WuLatino- MANGANI]

And Hector, quit promoting me ya groupie homo!

[iniquity]

Originally Posted by iniquity

. waiting for dusk to drop his second verse but if it's only a 1 rd battle dusk got this .

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