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Frailhorse · 10-12-2009, 09:08 PM

when i step up on the scene this cat best make way
when i pull out the glock its fucking judgement day
ill run up in your crib grab your herb and your ice
you know that im a nasty cracker far from nice
so step the fuck back before your ass get got
im in camoflague fatigues with a barrel thats hot
ill run up in your crib and smack your mom in the lip
po nine try to catch me but i give them the slip
you roll up in your whip im tring to pick the lock
ill roll thru your hood yelling suck my cock
when you see me on the streets kid give me respect
or else the fucking ground be a new shade of red

DVSK · 10-12-2009, 09:57 PM

Palehorse is getting broken in when i rope him in
with a strong case of broken chin, why the long face?
i go ape like Kong's race, u trynna play Dusk at a Pong pace
and ya mouth got a schlong taste
my darts tear apart like kindergarten art scissors
have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao)
c'mon son, dope ass rhymes im on them
u stompin thru my forum, while wearin ya moms tims
i dim lights for rappers with conspiracy theories
if ur hearin my clearly, ill kick ya fuckin rear thru ya ear piece
u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused
i ass crack patent crews with michael jacksons shoes

Poetic Wun · 10-13-2009, 05:10 AM

idk if this is over yet buuuut...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dusk

c'mon son, dope ass rhymes im on them
u stompin thru my forum, while wearin ya moms tims

lol

Quote:

u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused
i ass crack patent crews with michael jacksons shoes

nice

if theres another round i suggest Pale step it up.
otherwise Dusk is the bouncer for the monkey bars... you cant hang my nig

Frailhorse · 10-13-2009, 08:30 AM

hahaha alright. its not over yet......

Frailhorse · 10-13-2009, 08:40 AM

alright, you cats all know my steez
the flows i be kicking putting bitches on their knees
when i step up on the scene, front you cats some respect
all these hoes know that kid pale come correct
whether rocking tommy hill, nautica or perry ellis
birds all flock and say fuck them other fellas
you say you want to battle? well bring it trick please
swatting MCs off my nuts like a doggie scratches fleas
im coming straight from the slums, a mothering fucking default
your mom be pulling tricks like a 5 dollar crack whore
im dipping through your hood with my man and the heat
when i pull this post you feeling nothing but defeat
so back the fuck up yo im just about to peak
and ask lancaster police ill leave you lying in a creek
hahaha word up respect that hoe hhhaa

SID · 10-13-2009, 08:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dusk

have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao)

haha.

Frailhorse · 10-13-2009, 09:01 AM

haha yea that line is even funnier if you know the whole story. its kinda an inside joke between us

SID · 10-13-2009, 09:37 AM

right...

HZA HECTOR · 10-13-2009, 01:12 PM

Behold a palehorse/
hit yah wit the dark side of the jedi force/
knock your starship off course/
from dusk too red dawn/bitch be gone/
you fuck'n wit the underworld def deal'n/
hell spawnz/hza,skampope,palehorse vs. Drunkenmonk,mangani,dusk

Poetic Wun · 10-13-2009, 05:04 PM

this dude needs some medication

Mumm Ra · 10-13-2009, 05:44 PM

Quote:

have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao)

u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused

really liked those lines (lol at part lizard)

i think dusk killed it tho

pRoTeChTyAnEcK · 10-13-2009, 05:53 PM

*I'm feelin Dusk more than Palehorse on this one*...Good shit though.

I was under the impression that the thread title is Dusk vs. Palehorse

I don't see where it says...

Dusk vs. Palehorse vs.
HZA HOT GARBAGE.

Frailhorse · 10-13-2009, 06:06 PM

alright i hope dusk comes back cuz im bored but can i get some constructive criticism

pRoTeChTyAnEcK · 10-13-2009, 06:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PALEHORSE

alright i hope dusk comes back cuz im bored but can i get some constructive criticism

Your battle lines were very basic...Nothing wrong with it as long as you can keep up the rhyme in bars, but try using metaphors & other wordplay.
Use more clever ways of attack.

Here are a couple lines from Dusk that I liked:

"i go ape like Kong's race, u trynna play Dusk at a Pong pace"

"my darts tear apart like kindergarten art scissors"

Mumm Ra · 10-13-2009, 06:35 PM

also I'd try to use more multi-syllable rhymes instead of day/way or ice/nice
like how dusk did theories/ ear piece and magnitute/dragon fused

peace

10-12-2009, 09:08 PM	#1
Frailhorse penalty boxed user Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 5,439 Rep Power: 0	Palehorse vs. DUSK when i step up on the scene this cat best make way when i pull out the glock its fucking judgement day ill run up in your crib grab your herb and your ice you know that im a nasty cracker far from nice so step the fuck back before your ass get got im in camoflague fatigues with a barrel thats hot ill run up in your crib and smack your mom in the lip po nine try to catch me but i give them the slip you roll up in your whip im tring to pick the lock ill roll thru your hood yelling suck my cock when you see me on the streets kid give me respect or else the fucking ground be a new shade of red

10-12-2009, 09:57 PM	#2
DVSK Iron Man 3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 18,188 Rep Power: 65	Palehorse is getting broken in when i rope him in with a strong case of broken chin, why the long face? i go ape like Kong's race, u trynna play Dusk at a Pong pace and ya mouth got a schlong taste my darts tear apart like kindergarten art scissors have u buggin like u heard that Dusk was part Lizard (lmao) c'mon son, dope ass rhymes im on them u stompin thru my forum, while wearin ya moms tims i dim lights for rappers with conspiracy theories if ur hearin my clearly, ill kick ya fuckin rear thru ya ear piece u fear beasts of my magnitute, im dragon fused i ass crack patent crews with michael jacksons shoes __________________

10-13-2009, 09:37 AM	#8
SID I see you dawg Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Planning some trill shit Posts: 7,079 Rep Power: 24	right... __________________ Bank heist in Kathmandu, it was a slaughter The day Buddha was born it rained tea instead of water http://rapidshare.com/#!download\|818...Mix.zip\|207205

10-13-2009, 05:04 PM	#10
Poetic Wun Non-Ignorants Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Lamest City, Earth Posts: 2,227 Rep Power: 17	this dude needs some medication __________________

10-13-2009, 05:53 PM	#12
pRoTeChTyAnEcK funkmaster general Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Tustin, CA Age: 30 Posts: 1,439 Rep Power: 21	I'm feelin Dusk more than Palehorse on this one...Good shit though. I was under the impression that the thread title is Dusk vs. Palehorse I don't see where it says... Dusk vs. Palehorse vs. HZA HOT GARBAGE. __________________

10-13-2009, 08:30 AM	#4
Frailhorse penalty boxed user Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 5,439 Rep Power: 0	hahaha alright. its not over yet......

10-13-2009, 08:40 AM	#5
Frailhorse penalty boxed user Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 5,439 Rep Power: 0	alright, you cats all know my steez the flows i be kicking putting bitches on their knees when i step up on the scene, front you cats some respect all these hoes know that kid pale come correct whether rocking tommy hill, nautica or perry ellis birds all flock and say fuck them other fellas you say you want to battle? well bring it trick please swatting MCs off my nuts like a doggie scratches fleas im coming straight from the slums, a mothering fucking default your mom be pulling tricks like a 5 dollar crack whore im dipping through your hood with my man and the heat when i pull this post you feeling nothing but defeat so back the fuck up yo im just about to peak and ask lancaster police ill leave you lying in a creek hahaha word up respect that hoe hhhaa

10-13-2009, 09:01 AM	#7
Frailhorse penalty boxed user Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 5,439 Rep Power: 0	haha yea that line is even funnier if you know the whole story. its kinda an inside joke between us

10-13-2009, 01:12 PM	#9
HZA HECTOR AMERICAN BORICUA KILLABEE Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 190 Rep Power: 0	Behold a palehorse/ hit yah wit the dark side of the jedi force/ knock your starship off course/ from dusk too red dawn/bitch be gone/ you fuck'n wit the underworld def deal'n/ hell spawnz/hza,skampope,palehorse vs. Drunkenmonk,mangani,dusk

10-13-2009, 06:06 PM	#13
Frailhorse penalty boxed user Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 5,439 Rep Power: 0	alright i hope dusk comes back cuz im bored but can i get some constructive criticism

10-13-2009, 06:35 PM	#15
Mumm Ra God's Replica Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Black Pyramid Age: 27 Posts: 9,602 Blog Entries: 2 Rep Power: 73	also I'd try to use more multi-syllable rhymes instead of day/way or ice/nice like how dusk did theories/ ear piece and magnitute/dragon fused peace __________________ DOWNLOAD MASTER PLAN LP!!

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