The Kings Chapter

[King Callabah]

i did a thread like this before, and so im makin another one......and ben said we should do now anyways, but i dun give a fuck bout feed, im jus droppin shit cos i feel like it, most yall hate ma irregular style anyways, i dun even care lol! blah

"The Unforgiven"

after death i returned to the house of the lord
saw my sins displayed on a big black bored
i peered toward the sky, eyes held a fear
i walked to the entrance and the door disapeared
exiled king, taken off the throne into a prison
locked with the outlaws, the villians, the unforgiven
shiped to the shores of hell like slaves on a ship
but i came equiped, i let free a clip
shells ripped thru the deamons red flesh and heads
the devil came to see wah the fuck god had sent
and there stood the one, amongst the hell fire
the same vision i had standing on the church spire
YUNG CAO CAO, the angels chant the name
king callabah was spelled on the ground, letters of flame
he drew his dark sword and summoned a rage
evil souls towered above me like a tidal wave
i stood strong on ma feet, took my sword of light
struck the evils to the ground a flash of day blinked the night
satan screamed in pain, i came forth to bring the change
drunk a keg of heavens wine and pissed on hells flames

more verses will be comin of course.......this is ma amroury, ma practise chamber, ma training pit

[BlaK FuRYaN]

Originally Posted by King Callabah

i did a thread like this before, and so im makin another one......and ben said we should do now anyways, but i dun give a fuck bout feed, im jus droppin shit cos i feel like it, most yall hate ma irregular style anyways, i dun even care lol! blah

"The Unforgiven"

after death i returned to the house of the lord
saw my sins displayed on a big black bored
i peered toward the sky, eyes held a fear
i walked to the entrance and the door disapeared
exiled king, taken off the throne into a prison
locked with the outlaws, the villians, the unforgiven
shiped to the shores of hell like slaves on a ship
but i came equiped, i let free a clip
shells ripped thru the deamons red flesh and heads
the devil came to see wah the fuck god had sent
and there stood the one, amongst the hell fire
the same vision i had standing on the church spire
YUNG CAO CAO, the angels chant the name
king callabah was spelled on the ground, letters of flame
he drew his dark sword and summoned a rage
evil souls towered above me like a tidal wave
i stood strong on ma feet, took my sword of light
struck the evils to the ground a flash of day blinked the night
satan screamed in pain, i came forth to bring the change
drunk a keg of heavens wine and pissed on hells flames

more verses will be comin of course.......this is ma amroury, ma practise chamber, ma training pit

Yo Callabah....this was tight bruh....i liked this....this is like suin i would write....nuff imagery....i pictured every word said....this aint irregular....quit frontin dog....

drop the nex one....

peace

[King Callabah]

yo thanx alot blak yo words is appriteated mang, much love

nex one comin soon

[Grim Reapa]

u make me laugh more of kinda poetry than rap nigga

[noel411]

Yeah, I'd have to agree with Furyan, the imagery in this piece was good. I liked the mood too. Good read.

[King Callabah]

peace to noel also

"Freestyle"

my speciality is a technicality
my irregularity brings origionality
its hard to vision a peaceful planet with clarity
im crazy like the Sunz Of Man on mics of insanity
raw grime, phantom wind chimes made of spines
injected with a poisen, i pose a threat to mankind
i pick up a golden pen and wright rhymes in my spare time
from the capital city of crime, blind lead the blind
look inside to find the faults and rewind
play memories back, use the film within ya mind
ignorent slime, seeps thru the doors in dark hallways
captures the juvenille mind but not mine
i stay above like clouds and light lifes like sun shine
the day of judgment came and i crossed the line
haters, choke on a chode cos i got no time fo ya
this shits for the kids who suffer within they native borders

[Grim Reapa]

nice audio audio audio 1

[King Callabah]

"Hollow Heads"

heathens preach evil under the name of religion
i took the knife to his head, and made the insission
saw the image of deamons, all chanting in rhythem
seems this human is a typical subject of the devil system
terrorism, a coalition with capitalism
killah priests drown evil spirts during baptism
in the rivers of the holy lands, water flows pure
the fountain of youth, mountain of holy cures
the snakes clutch youth, tell lies to hide the truth
assassination behind close doors to sever proof
they seperated races acording to colour of our faces
i grab a holy spear and drive it thru the hearts of racists
you stuck in the matrix, i beat down goliath like David
mixed race cross bread, stand on ships like the slaves did
blast lyrics thru ya brain, thats why im king callabah
another deamon slaughtered, bring on the next challenger

[noel411]

Your writing is very easy to read. As in it just flows nice when reading it, and doesn't get mixed up in complicated rhyme schemes and hidden messages and shit. You seem to just say what you wanna say, and use mostly simple rhymes to put it together. I like that. You do it well. Good stuff.

[6what131]

yo i was really feelin "hollow heads" especially-

saw the image of deamons, all chanting in rhythem
seems this human is a typical subject of the devil system
terrorism, a coalition with capitalism
killah priests drown evil spirts during baptism
in the rivers of the holy lands, water flows pure
the fountain of youth, mountain of holy cures

"the unforgiven" was ok to but hollow heads is alot better

[King Callabah]

mad peace to spoken and 6what much love peeps, good lookin!

[Sifu Dragon]

King C droppin heat, hollow heads is sick

[King Callabah]

elders forgot to mention they devilish ways
tryna turn ma generation into multi-race slaves
fuck bein behind a cage, ma rage sprays
in the form of silver led to make sure these devils pay
fuck with me and get buryed, i dont play around
im so hardcore, skelletons party underground
im the hostile kid with the "fuck you" attitude
i dont give a flyin fuck, in the streets i'd jus batter you
hate or love ma style i lack the skill to care
the heat from ma vocals sets fire to ya hair
fuckin look into ma eyes and see you nex to die
then run home to ya mother screamin why oh why
suck ma fuckin dick and lick ma nut sack
im pissed the fuck off and you gonna pay for that
i have so many styles where i can get critical
then i got this fucked up style that damage physicals
no feed for this, hate on me and drink ma piss
i dont give a fuckin shit if you aint feelin this

[denaturat]

You posted a while ago, but I just read it now. Love the first post, not my style this biblical apocalyptic theme, but I was still diggin it. You didn't waste words, pretty tight and concise. Ending is dope.

[the funky drunk]

yeh! all the verses on this thread are dope , u got a nice flow , u gonna drop some audio? coz that would be sick!