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Dae Ja Nae · 06-21-2005, 10:33 PM

once a bridge has been burned, can it ever be rebuilt

is there still beauty to be found once a rose begins to wilt

if one is heavily burdened with guilt, can the mind ever be freed

if you live in the shadow of doubt, will you ever be able to believe

if on a daily basis you greave, is there ever time for a smile

if you're an over achiever, do you ever relish a moment to rest for a while

if we all move in the circle of life, why are our thoughts so square

if we know the worst is yet to come, why are most never prepared

if the mind is plagued by nightmares, how does one ever dare to dream

how does one grasp the concept of an awful silent scream

how can one claim to thirst for knowledge, and be the first to deny the drink

how can you write your own ticket in life, if society refuses to supply the ink

if life is over as fast as the eye blinks, how can some moments last forever

can a relationship honestly stay intact after the friendship has been severed

how can home be where the heart is if one is truly empty inside

how can the most courageous person be afraid to swallow his or her pride

why isn't there anything beneath those who claim to be a step above

does it hurt so bad when you break up, because initially you "fell" in love

if one is held captive in a self-contained prison, why are they unable to escape

and if you're the master of your own destiny, how can another's action seal your fate?

Just pondering,

Peace

I-Legit · 06-21-2005, 10:52 PM

my answer would be, yes, simply cause if the thought excists...its highly possible
and yeh i see what your talkin about, but it sounds like u doubt a lot of things or somthing to the effect.

um for the rhymes, they were cool, not to hard to rhyme now n days...but i liked it, never belive everything u think about or think is true....could be anything......u never know

BlaK FuRYaN · 06-22-2005, 04:11 AM

One thing i admire about you Dae is your a swords-woman wid diverse talent....
You spit fire and convey food for thought....plus you keep up wid tha otha swordsmen uppin here....
As im a man who often reflekts tha purpose of life i can appraciate this skroll you crafted......

'stay awke'

GuardianOne · 06-22-2005, 06:34 AM

Its a refreshing verse, and a lot of thought between the lines. It might lead many to bring conclusions. It actually put a womens touch to it.

Peace
PS: Nice to have you back, how are you?

Dae Ja Nae · 06-22-2005, 10:07 AM

Good lookin' on the feedback fellas. I really appreciate it.

PS: I'm doing okay G-One, thx 4 asking

... how about yourself ?

I-Legit · 06-22-2005, 10:37 AM

yeh cause we all love carrots

GuardianOne · 06-23-2005, 01:55 AM

Hey what's with this peas and carrots, plus corn ( i hope its not what iam thinking)?

Peace

MASTER PAI MEI · 06-23-2005, 09:12 AM

Damn. Dae that was like drinking a Chocolate Milkshake very satisfying...

I love the way you asked those questions you Inspire me to write even more!!!!!

PEACE Queen do ya thing!!

TUCO · 06-23-2005, 06:55 PM

there is no particular line that stands out IMO
the wholr peice is beautiful yo, no fuckin doubt mama
just continue to amaze the shit outta me

peace

Sicka than aidZ · 06-23-2005, 11:18 PM

ill prolly spend half my life trying to write something as beautiful as that and wont come up with anything like what u can recite,..thats beautiful and amazing. I like reading the poetry on these forums alot. staycool, 1

Dae Ja Nae · 06-24-2005, 01:31 PM

Much love in the Temple

... that's real peace. You guys are too much

.

THX

Dae Ja Nae · 06-24-2005, 01:33 PM

Haha ... Peas, carrots, corn and chocolate milkshakes ... Hmm

blackwisdom · 07-09-2005, 07:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dae Ja Nae

once a bridge has been burned, can it ever be rebuilt

is there still beauty to be found once a rose begins to wilt

if one is heavily burdened with guilt, can the mind ever be freed

if you live in the shadow of doubt, will you ever be able to believe

if on a daily basis you greave, is there ever time for a smile

if you're an over achiever, do you ever relish a moment to rest for a while

if we all move in the circle of life, why are our thoughts so square

if we know the worst is yet to come, why are most never prepared

if the mind is plagued by nightmares, how does one ever dare to dream

how does one grasp the concept of an awful silent scream

how can one claim to thirst for knowledge, and be the first to deny the drink

how can you write your own ticket in life, if society refuses to supply the ink

if life is over as fast as the eye blinks, how can some moments last forever

can a relationship honestly stay intact after the friendship has been severed

how can home be where the heart is if one is truly empty inside

how can the most courageous person be afraid to swallow his or her pride

why isn't there anything beneath those who claim to be a step above

does it hurt so bad when you break up, because initially you "fell" in love

if one is held captive in a self-contained prison, why are they unable to escape

and if you're the master of your own destiny, how can another's action seal your fate?

Just pondering,

Peace

It's been a while since I've been able to read my thoughts. I miss that. My skills always elevate after hearing my second voice. Thanks you for speaking.

I wonder what the world would be like if indigenous people held down their nations
For thousands of years they've had peaceful ship trades until the meeting with pale faces
Men cloned from grease monkeys and albinos on the "so called island of Patmos"
Un-natural beings now grown to the all eye seeing, the originators and benefactors of toast
I can go on for days on how I want to instill in the youth the truth of this planets origins
But I wonder why when I start to tell the truth my views are greeted so foreign
I'm an African with the heart of Mandela and the spirit of General Nat Turner
I know that the Earth would breathe a sigh of relief once we begin to learn her and properly love her

peace Da'

b1ack fact10n · 07-09-2005, 08:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dae Ja Nae

once a bridge has been burned, can it ever be rebuilt

is there still beauty to be found once a rose begins to wilt

if one is heavily burdened with guilt, can the mind ever be freed

if you live in the shadow of doubt, will you ever be able to believe

if on a daily basis you greave, is there ever time for a smile

if you're an over achiever, do you ever relish a moment to rest for a while

if we all move in the circle of life, why are our thoughts so square

if we know the worst is yet to come, why are most never prepared

if the mind is plagued by nightmares, how does one ever dare to dream

how does one grasp the concept of an awful silent scream

how can one claim to thirst for knowledge, and be the first to deny the drink

how can you write your own ticket in life, if society refuses to supply the ink

if life is over as fast as the eye blinks, how can some moments last forever

can a relationship honestly stay intact after the friendship has been severed

how can home be where the heart is if one is truly empty inside

how can the most courageous person be afraid to swallow his or her pride

why isn't there anything beneath those who claim to be a step above

does it hurt so bad when you break up, because initially you "fell" in love

if one is held captive in a self-contained prison, why are they unable to escape

and if you're the master of your own destiny, how can another's action seal your fate?

Just pondering,

Peace

Deep. Really deep. I wouldnt be able to come up with something half as inspirational if I sat on my ass for a year. Nice one,hope to read more.

Racailla · 07-09-2005, 09:04 AM

I definitley love these poetic lines, much love!

06-21-2005, 10:33 PM	#1
Dae Ja Nae Priceless:The Modern IsIs Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Norfolk, VA Posts: 815 Rep Power: 12	I wonder ... once a bridge has been burned, can it ever be rebuilt is there still beauty to be found once a rose begins to wilt if one is heavily burdened with guilt, can the mind ever be freed if you live in the shadow of doubt, will you ever be able to believe if on a daily basis you greave, is there ever time for a smile if you're an over achiever, do you ever relish a moment to rest for a while if we all move in the circle of life, why are our thoughts so square if we know the worst is yet to come, why are most never prepared if the mind is plagued by nightmares, how does one ever dare to dream how does one grasp the concept of an awful silent scream how can one claim to thirst for knowledge, and be the first to deny the drink how can you write your own ticket in life, if society refuses to supply the ink if life is over as fast as the eye blinks, how can some moments last forever can a relationship honestly stay intact after the friendship has been severed how can home be where the heart is if one is truly empty inside how can the most courageous person be afraid to swallow his or her pride why isn't there anything beneath those who claim to be a step above does it hurt so bad when you break up, because initially you "fell" in love if one is held captive in a self-contained prison, why are they unable to escape and if you're the master of your own destiny, how can another's action seal your fate? Just pondering, Peace __________________ *I sew...* beautiful seeds that sprout flowers that’s deeply rooted your weak style-diluted with concepts that’s so polluted my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ... *-- Dae Ja Nae* http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503

06-21-2005, 10:52 PM	#2
I-Legit Fuckin' Left Join Date: Jun 2005 Age: 25 Posts: 860 Rep Power: 9	Re: I wonder ... my answer would be, yes, simply cause if the thought excists...its highly possible and yeh i see what your talkin about, but it sounds like u doubt a lot of things or somthing to the effect. um for the rhymes, they were cool, not to hard to rhyme now n days...but i liked it, never belive everything u think about or think is true....could be anything......u never know

06-22-2005, 04:11 AM	#3
BlaK FuRYaN MaN-ov-WaR Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 808 Rep Power: 9	Re: I wonder ... One thing i admire about you Dae is your a swords-woman wid diverse talent.... You spit fire and convey food for thought....plus you keep up wid tha otha swordsmen uppin here.... As im a man who often reflekts tha purpose of life i can appraciate this skroll you crafted...... 'stay awke' __________________ ORPHANS OF CUSH OUT SOON

06-22-2005, 06:34 AM	#4
GuardianOne Taoist Saint Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Zambia Age: 32 Posts: 1,271 Rep Power: 10	Re: I wonder ... Its a refreshing verse, and a lot of thought between the lines. It might lead many to bring conclusions. It actually put a womens touch to it. Peace PS: Nice to have you back, how are you? __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/artist/6/guardianone_music.htm www.zimvibes.com www.audiozim.com

06-22-2005, 10:07 AM	#5
Dae Ja Nae Priceless:The Modern IsIs Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Norfolk, VA Posts: 815 Rep Power: 12	Re: I wonder ... Good lookin' on the feedback fellas. I really appreciate it. PS: I'm doing okay G-One, thx 4 asking ... how about yourself ? __________________ *I sew...* beautiful seeds that sprout flowers that’s deeply rooted your weak style-diluted with concepts that’s so polluted my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ... *-- Dae Ja Nae* http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503

06-22-2005, 10:37 AM	#6
I-Legit Fuckin' Left Join Date: Jun 2005 Age: 25 Posts: 860 Rep Power: 9	Re: I wonder ... yeh cause we all love carrots

06-23-2005, 01:55 AM	#7
GuardianOne Taoist Saint Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Zambia Age: 32 Posts: 1,271 Rep Power: 10	Re: I wonder ... Hey what's with this peas and carrots, plus corn ( i hope its not what iam thinking)? Peace __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/artist/6/guardianone_music.htm www.zimvibes.com www.audiozim.com

06-23-2005, 09:12 AM	#8
MASTER PAI MEI Are you aware I kill at will? Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: The Depths of Shaolin Posts: 7,722,350 Blog Entries: 1 Rep Power: 10	Re: I wonder ... Damn. Dae that was like drinking a Chocolate Milkshake very satisfying... I love the way you asked those questions you Inspire me to write even more!!!!! PEACE Queen do ya thing!! __________________

06-23-2005, 06:55 PM	#9
TUCO THE DIFFERENCE Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: D.A.D.E Posts: 5,127 Rep Power: 22	Re: I wonder ... there is no particular line that stands out IMO the wholr peice is beautiful yo, no fuckin doubt mama just continue to amaze the shit outta me peace __________________ a.k.a. The Difference saying check out my 1st video SOUNDCLOUD FACEBOOK

06-23-2005, 11:18 PM	#10
Sicka than aidZ JOKER FAM Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Westside connected (westcoast) Age: 33 Posts: 15,267 Rep Power: 41	Re: I wonder ... ill prolly spend half my life trying to write something as beautiful as that and wont come up with anything like what u can recite,..thats beautiful and amazing. I like reading the poetry on these forums alot. staycool, 1 __________________ "BACK TO FUKIN WERK 1 OF YOUR THREADZ JUST GOT DUSTED" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxb9kvJpE4w

06-24-2005, 01:31 PM	#11
Dae Ja Nae Priceless:The Modern IsIs Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Norfolk, VA Posts: 815 Rep Power: 12	Re: I wonder ... Much love in the Temple ... that's real peace. You guys are too much . THX __________________ *I sew...* beautiful seeds that sprout flowers that’s deeply rooted your weak style-diluted with concepts that’s so polluted my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ... *-- Dae Ja Nae* http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503

06-24-2005, 01:33 PM	#12
Dae Ja Nae Priceless:The Modern IsIs Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Norfolk, VA Posts: 815 Rep Power: 12	Re: I wonder ... Haha ... Peas, carrots, corn and chocolate milkshakes ... Hmm __________________ *I sew...* beautiful seeds that sprout flowers that’s deeply rooted your weak style-diluted with concepts that’s so polluted my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ... *-- Dae Ja Nae* http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503

07-09-2005, 09:04 AM	#15
Racailla Neb-maat Ra Join Date: May 2004 Location: Chinguetti Posts: 238 Rep Power: 0	Re: I wonder ... I definitley love these poetic lines, much love! __________________ Look at my nephew, he jumped at the window just to see you (The Sun - Ghostface, Rza, Raekwon and Slick Rick) http://www.myspace.com/racailla

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