Sheepish Lord Of Chaos Thread

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

Gets the NASDAQ putting my APPLE on track
Trying to recoup the INTEL check me like Dow Jones/
On the phone it’s NYNEX or BELL exponent covert
Like AT&T connecting it ain’t me similar to MCI & SPRINT/
Fixing rates like TIMER WARNER on the corner making a buck
Ducking the Po’s my flows save me from throwing the knife 2 my wrist/
Ending this shit but I ain’t checking in like VERIZON arms a rising similar to stock prices profiting from others misfortune/
I ain’t out to disproportionate the inflation rate that loans make
Continuous educating me I need the BANK OF AMERICA/
To stop hassling me for pesos I ain’t state I have yo
Collecting on my intellect trying to put me in CHECK SYSTEMS/
I ain’t rich or kill a bitch like Norman Bates and shit
I flip my flows like RICH PORTER did Coke yo/
If you ain’t feeling me take a number cuz critics ain’t shit too me
But another ROBERT EBERT that can’t relate to it/

[IslamicAssassin]

My flows colder than freon.
Most of you rap niggaz is PAWNS.
I'm advancin' my BISHOP and QUEEN.
Leavin' you KINGZ stuck at d1.
Acknowledge fate.
Flow is outstanding like a college rate.
Or city hustlers shoeboxes
accumulatin' out-of-state.
I guess the basic message
I'm trying to insinuate
is that I'm like Bobby Fischer
and Maurice Ashley.
A little Garry Kasparov.
A little Boris Spassky.
Except I aint a Chessmaster.
But I will none the less blast ya'.
A hip-hop thugsta, like Eazy E.
Play corners like a ROOK.
Poisonous like Inspektah Deck
joining BBD.
Aint none of yall niggaz movin' me.
So come all out ya' face
like a protected KNIGHT at 2c,
you'll think it was two of me.
You was smokin' 64 squares,
up in the bing, tied.
I was occupying ya' castle, up on ya' queenside.

[Grim Reapa]

YO VERY NICE U NEW AND THAT WUZ PRETTY GOOD I DONT SAY THAT ABOUT EVERYBODY HOMIE PM ME IF U WANNA JOIN MY GROUP SUPREME MATHEMATIX 1

[u-turn]

nice verse

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

Originally Posted by u-turn

nice verse

thanks and the other kid had a nice verse 2

[GuardianOne]

It flowed well, with the references it got some lost since they did not know some of the names. But it seemed on point.

Peace
PS: And IslamicAssassin good looking out, nice verse with the chess and all, keep posting-like to see more of your verses.

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

Open ya mind escape the parallels of modern society
Seek the information Enquiring minds wanna know/
I need variety in my life strike the match spread knowledge
Similar to a wildfire out west while the east lay their head 2 rest/
Nature nurtured us we’re guests on the playing field called Earth
Ring the bell accompany many approaching the bench awaiting my sentence/
Commenting on points given appointed lawyers doing us wrong
Like Tom Sawyer I bomb yall make ya smell Napalm in the morning/
Politics quick the submit to corporate greed seen in seeds instilled in drinks, Infecting our mental wit advertisements constantly implanting hatred in us/
Even thou some consider the raps I rap is abstract I connect wit different heads applying know-how like FEDS apply them selves on taking us down/
This ain’t no count I’m real live on mound throwing heaters at any batter that appears daring to face the Best-Even-Now/
I suggest Better-Efforts-Niggaz cause you can’t touch the logical lyrical armed material fearing the truth I speak up in the booth tearing off da roof/

[ODBRIP7]

Yo u aiight dun.

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

Actual facts detract truths listen to the grooves
Called it soothing I’m moving heads wit my Darts/
Sparking just a thought fought the principles listening
To their points don’t dent what I about as if I was ignoring them/
Expand my mind thou others gathering garments stitching together clothes Patches bought me a salvation creating an army worthy like James in a Lakers Jersey/
Ain’t shit gonna disturb me I Ruff Ryde the thought you seeing my demise I got redemption within a verses grasp don’t be gassed just breathe and I’ll stop/
Leaving you dropped like baby spanked for misbehaving seeing the wavier judgmental on the sentence dropped on me like a surprise to me/

[J.T.S.]

I liked this won, tight stay up lord.

[GuardianOne]

It seems you're not being creative, or maybe you're not really interested in this verse. Can also relate to the title (kind of just for the sake)

Peace
PS: Keep posting, and try an be a bit serious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[GuardianOne]

Here you lyrical display was better, and it had its flow. Rhymed well also. Keep posting the first part was nice although the last seemed like you had lost the touch. But it was nice.

Peace
PS:Keep posting

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

I can spit and bring the funk
Without being Punk’D by Ashton but Dem Need more than PO’s to get me/
Calling it a slam dunk when you getting
Stomped out while we’re wildin’ out and we not on Crunk Juice/
I don’t need skits to show e’m I’m ludicrous
Lyrically you’re new to this just know I’m focused and you got excuses/
I hope you don’t need a raft cuz you’re gonna sink or swim
Sharks infest that water pull ya head out cha ass cuz ya at the alter/
Hope you ain’t getting married to chick right there heard she got
More men than a sperm bank got donors on average basis/
I take any test and pass it spit more words
Then you ungrateful bastards don’t even acknowledge my merit/
I shoot you off the tersest and I don’t need 9 shots
Just to make me a star just gimme a beat and I’ll write cha some bars/
Hope you don’t go far, cuz I’m coming to collect
My checks and royalties like the IRS You Owe me/

[GuardianOne]

You where a bit creative with this verse, though not too much. But you seem to be gaining more on the lyrical side.

Peace
PS:Keep posting

[SHEEPISH LORD OF CHAOS]

If you daring me
I’m a start attacking/
Rapidly folding hands you pansies
Can’t tangle or tango wit an emcee/
Such that thee signees couldn’t see wit beyond
Skin deep starting to creep like TLC but I’m beyond the/
F the bull you red wit slop down these hills
I fill paragraph wit mines aligned wit wires that trip/
Booby traps in depth wrecking ya whole set
Disconnecting any plans you may set in the end/
Rendering you helpless cuz you’re more than selfish
I’m worth something cuz you see me in you and vise versa/
After every conversation you creating notions closed wit caption
Mastering techniques that’s supposed to be oblique to me unique/
Don’t freak when I speak activating knowledge you bought
From books laid wit hooks looking for my ways to be crooked/
I took my rhymes up another notch like emcees that supposed to
Be diplomatically abrasive creating landmarks for others to start/
Instead they tarnish the pavement making it hard for up and comers
To spark they’re own movement like Wu Tang I’m improving/
Approving schools and footages crafting movements that
Start something and finish what cha once sparked/