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09-14-2010, 01:33 PM
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courage under fire
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The One Man Regiment
THE HIGHLANDER
I'm a spiritual highlander my lyrics hit intense listeners and innocent bystanders the intent's to uplift His scripture and defy slander it's a rhyme extravaganza this is not your average banter stanza after stanza gives props to the Father and stops propaganda finishing His business and living as a consistent witness sits atop the memoranda an exercise in Christian fitness and my equipment is manna when my mission's done I wanna sit with the Son and watch the sunrise from Heaven's veranda
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09-14-2010, 01:34 PM
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QUESTS WERE WED
squarely written, scarcely read one with vision of this precision is rarely bred his wisdom's been hidden unfairly forbidden yet very carefully spread I've shared Bread my mental treks the breadth where lesser men have barely tread some detested, some scarily fled some voluntarily followed as I unwarily led burdens once carried get shed nary a word is unnecessarily said let us then tarry instead remembering Mary's blessed Son bled to let the dead bury their dead quests were wed yes, wherever there's fellowship, surely it is there that I will rest my head
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09-14-2010, 01:35 PM
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REMNANTS OF MEN
hymns overflowing with gems pass poetically thru my brain stem enter the left hemisphere and get my 3 anatomical planes hemmed nocturnal.. I daydream in widescreen HD REM my genetic code is read then sent in strands that spin at infinite RPM textured more complex than any temple erected by Christopher Wren the gods catchin wreck in the sector and his grin is sinister again a tenured penman who extends from the descendants of Shem my index bends until a blend of scripture and Zen makes remnants of men
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09-14-2010, 01:37 PM
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PUCE
a peaceful theologian spoke metrical poems through PC modems holy, though mostly deemed theoretical like the prose of medieval Trojans devotional slogans slowly molded to produce the erosion of evil omens he chose puce and broke wholly loose from the moral corrosion of Caesar's Romans he opened more domes than Homer and rode home like a lordless shogun order restored by the reddened-sword holder whose warrior code is 47 Ronin emboldened soldier glows hot releasin' shocks like nova explosions unique flow pops like street-copped glocks leavin' hoe's optical lobes frozen
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09-14-2010, 01:38 PM
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THE OFFERING
I'm a wiseman who grasps degrees that befuddle Master Masons I decapitate emcees and capture sacrificial blood in alabaster basins those who falter baste in atonement over bronze-grated altars their remains scatter in the ocean as I narrate from John's sacred psalters the covetous get crushed with one subtle utterance they haven't advanced in substance to understand the sustenance of the covenants in fine dress my deaconess prepares feasts and trods the winepress for Zion's guests who seek peace knowing with God is where they'll dine best
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09-14-2010, 01:39 PM
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DON'T GO AGAINST THE GRAIN
I harvest raps then carve the caps of cats that go against the grain like a thresher craft mathematically exact abstract graphs that slash dimensional planes like M.C. Escher a wealth of clever legerdemain invades brains and maintains insane pressure self-ordained to reign forever so there ain't no lane for no lame to be proclaimed successor see, son rose on the third day and on the seventh I rested a poet whose prose and wordplay is Heaven-sent and will never be bested my skills still haven't crested yet my benevolence is ever requested with His blessed presence I'm well invested hence my development will never be arrested
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09-14-2010, 01:41 PM
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SAW
ya gods juggular got gauzed but it didn't pause the spill at the sawmill magicians in awe of the slaughter the kid'll flip visual raw like its Vaudeville audible piff riddles ya dome like Swiss bricks my clip's long as a trombone avid for bad acid trips.. spit sick.. I'll sic a rabid Pit to go gnaw on ya jawbone particular with vics a soot-dipped sickle inflicted the death blow picks with perpendicular sticks dig six-foot pits in which bitches'll rest low dip quick and ditch the shits.. slip clean off.. a most wicked and sinister scene hidden .5th at the hip'll lick clips at the pigs that play close and wish to intervene
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09-14-2010, 01:43 PM
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THE ILLEST IN MICHIGAN
I'm the illest in Michigan, make Eminem look like Gilligan where I'm from, niggas trick whips with spinners on winterized Michelins crush green, pack iron and pimp links like Phil Mickelson rush scenes, blast pistols and big-up queens like British militiamen chicks birth illegitimate kids that be sickly and illiterate quick evictions and long bids that consist of rigorous imprisonment visits and kites diminish the plight but peaceful nights be limited pitiful site, criminals released to streets repeat cycle and go right back in again still, millions of Christians with religious conviction get it in and be missionin' positioned as strictly fastidious and oblivious to negative stimulus and its conditionin' War and Peace kickin the wickedest shit since Killah Priest spit heat on 'Elizabeth' before your deceased best beat ya feet and kill the iniquitous beast that ya livin with
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09-14-2010, 01:47 PM
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THE CRUEL PROSPECTOR
I have an extensive history of offensive victories a sudden switch to the defensive would be senseless and contradictory thus once again I press ahead aggressively reaching fresh tactical objectives manifests in enemy deaths addressed consecutively casualties stack up as I casually pack up I simply have an affinity for leaving everything in the vicinity infinitely jacked up bitches best get with the Trinity and pick ya divinity back up aerial drops blast burial plots: cadavers wrapped in shallow sandtraps clapped up got a knack to re-enact graphic combat flash-backs with exact precision traffic illicit writtens and amass vast provisions after I ransack any likkle class or division the cruel prospector shootin dual-barrel shots at the pop sector fools' peril in duels fuel the true-school reflector's resurrection of the top-notch God texture
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09-14-2010, 01:50 PM
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STRAIGHT NO CHASER
can't sit and wait, I'm destined to be greater I bait fate's line then blank it like an eraser its a waste of time to filtrate Grace, I take it straight no chaser I blanket cyberspace with rhymes in the likeness of fiber-optic lasers traitors try to calculate the bit-rate but equate to pixelated haters blatantly vie to desecrate the high Estate and assimilate later Satan's way is fake, he wades in hot lakes of fiery vapors as they of divine faith congregate at Zion's gate to embrace and kiss the face of the Creator
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09-15-2010, 12:09 AM
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Just had a quick read of the first couple of drops. I liked the rhyme patterns and overall structure and content, but couldn't quite catch the flow. Seemed uneven with some overly long lines especially. But it might well just be the way I'm reading it. You've probably got a structured flow I'm not catching.
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09-21-2010, 05:08 PM
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ONE MAN REGIMENT
this is the testament of a one man regiment devilish men get covered in dust and sediment for negative sentiments sinners with a lust for mistrust and pestilence are left tentative and penitent as a gust of wind, I usher in a fresh presence of unprecedented eminence never've been hesitant to invest in betterment confessed my sins, professed Him; then my life was blessed with much less detriment accepted the pen and expressed messages that held special resonance exercised my intelligence and developed a poetic ethic that blends witness and eloquence never will I scribble written remnants that get rendered irrelevant this is lyrical and grammatical excellence with an extra-exceptional sense of reverence my position is evident in my preference for scriptural prevalence my mission's to ascend yet remain humble like the biblical peasants in Egyptian settlements hence, without listlessness or impediment I'll press ahead toward Heaven's residence where an infinite and incomprehensible elegance is extended by the most Generous and Benevolent
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09-22-2010, 11:54 AM
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this is the testament of a one man regiment
devilish men get covered in dust and sediment for negative sentiments sinners with a lust for mistrust and pestilence are left tentative and penitent as a gust of wind, I usher in a fresh presence of unprecedented eminence never've been hesitant to invest in betterment crazy rhyme schemes !
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